United States • 22 y/o • MaleReviews Given
I like this a lot. I love when poems tell stories.
It's brave to share this opinion. Looking at the reviews is kind of funny because most of them are people agreeing with you, and those reviews are downvoted to -4 or some such number, and it just amuses me that they're completely silent but still feel spiteful and angry enough to do that.
Guys, if you're reading this, just learn to deal with other people having and expressing opinions that are different than yours.
WAY better than I expected going into it. This is amazing.
You SHOULD be proud of this. I don't have words to explain how it makes me feel.
While the execution was really good, the premis is just genius. The ending almost felt too down to earth after the story we were just told, though
The way you wrote this, especially the end, was so inspirational!
I want this to be an animated short film
Um.... This is very good. I'm glad there's another part, because I feel personally offended that someone read that notebook!