Thomas Ray

Here's my rating again. Ugh, I can't believe I deleted that.

That hit HARD. I'm almost not okay withthe levels of pure emotion pouring off of this. The only thing I'd change is how fast the death happened. Maybe if he tried to get her to open the door, then shrugged it off, but then later, like at dinner, he breaks the door.
But wow, I physically hurt at that ending, as well as all throughout. Bullying is not okay in any circumstance, not okay for or from any person, and harmful 100% of the time, if only on a subconscious level.
Keep writing! I love this.

WAY better than I expected going into it. This is amazing.

Your writing style is awesome. "And yes, it was very dramatic," gets me every time. The narrator has a voice, and it's a fun one.
Still don't know about the bacon theme, though.

I think it's vital to trust others as much as you want them to trust you. This is not meant to be an argument, I really like this.

This is perfect

Arite, I wanna read everything you write from here on out. I'm really really annoying these.