Reviews Given
This story is really serious, and while it is your first story, I can vividly imagine what's happening. A sobering story. Good work.
Wow! This story is really cool. Can't wait for your next submission.
Also, what inspired this story?
Short things can be cool. I wish I had psychology....
This is your best submission so far. My favorite, anyway.
Interesting.
I like this. You better make this a little more happy in the next chapter, because, while I do like sad things, this character needs some joy in her life.
This story has potential, so good luck!