United States • 17 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
This is great! You're right, there's no way to turn back the clock. But if confess with your mouth and believe in your heart that Jesus Christ died for your sins you will be saved!
A very inspiring piece of writing, great job! Also, when writing a stanza try using shift+enter and then just regular enter for a new stanza. I hope this helps!
This is practically perfect in every way. I love how you described the verses and connected them to your own life. I will have to read through Job when I get the chance because the verses you cited have inspired me to search for others like them. A brilliant piece of writing! I hope you will continue to show your artistic side through writing.
O. M. G. That was literally incredible! The way it was written, the way you repeated the same thing a couple times, the way the main character struggled to not be caught in the loop, every last sentence was incredible. You did an amazing job and I would love to see more like this!
I love how called his goggles “color-correcting glasses,” it just made me laugh. Great job! Your writing always brings a smile to my face, no matter what the story’s about.
I would really like to know where this came from. It’s okay if you don’t wanna talk abt it, tho. Just know that I’m here if you ever want to talk (about anything at all).
The poem was great! It was like a flowing story and I really like that. You are an incredible writer, all you need is a little confidence.
Wow, great job explaining this! I've never had an occurrence like this, at least not one I can remember. You have a few run-on sentences, but that's easily fixed. If you'd like some help editing it, I'm here if you need me!
This is one of the best things you've written! The way you described the snow was perfect, great job! I'm so intrigued by how you wrote the cat's dialogue. How did they lose their name? And why was the spirit a cat, anyway? I would love to see more like this!
Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous.
Every girl needs to find this letter hidden somewhere in their life. Thank you for sharing it <3