Lyn

My, my, how the turntables...
A wonderful story! Your writing is so mesmerizing. I can't believe his uncle would do that. Well, okay, I was expecting something to go wrong, but that caught me off guard. Great job!

I laughed so hard I couldn’t breathe, omg!

I like how you described a few of the sins and let the others be more of a mystery. I'm a detective, so this'll be fun to figure out! :D
Good job describing Amaia, it was like I could almost see her. You're a very talented writer, keep going!

Wow, I can't wait to see where this is going! I need to know about these men she's being thrust upon in marriage so that I can decide who I like better. But, for now, I'd say that she should marry Gabriella's brother so that she may have a husband as well. You're very talented, keep writing!

This is beautiful, you deserve so much more than what you are receiving. This really touched my heart. Thanks for sharing this poem with us <3
You might never read this, but you really do deserve some love for this. It's incredible!

This is amazing! That driver is so kind to tell them what he thinks they should do. I know of about a dozen people who would just bring them to their destination and watch as they get mugged. I really enjoyed your writing, it made my day!

That last line is hilarious! You're very talented, I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Woah... I'm kinda late, but I can still show my love, right? This was amazing! No one ever kills the main character... I'll have to try it sometime. Great writing!