Lyn

Woah... I'm kinda late, but I can still show my love, right? This was amazing! No one ever kills the main character... I'll have to try it sometime. Great writing!

I laughed so hard I couldn’t breathe, omg!

Omg i can see how you improved!!!

This is a beautiful writing technique! I hope that you're alright. I'm so sorry you had to go through something like this. If you would like to talk about it, I'm here. If you don't, I just pray that you're okay. Keep writing, you are so very talented <3

Tears in my eyes T^T
Great story!

I"m practically in tears! Keep writing, it was beautiful. o(TヘTo)

Hey, it's me again! In paragraph 5, you have a quotation mark at the beginning where it's not needed. I personally don't have intrusive thoughts, so I can't say that this has affected me in any way, but I know that this can help others, which is great! Keep writing!

Beautiful! Your special one is lucky as hell to have you! Just a few grammatical errors. You have some run-on sentences and a few typos. If you would like me to tell you where they are, I would be happy to. But other than that, your writing is gorgeous! I can't wait to read more!