Reviews Given
That was amazing I felt like I was there watching it. LOVE.
Love it!
Amazing. The way it is worded at the end is just incredible.
That was an amazing pott. In the middle when the girls were killed i felt as if I was going to cry it has such a powerful way of putting it across. The message behind it is amazing.
That was amazing but did you have to leave it on a cliff hanger. But that does make me want to read the next part.
Oh My God I love that it made me cry. Plz continue!!!
OH MY GOD. That is amazing. I love it.
That is so sad and the way you were talking as if it was someone you know then say it was you made it more sad and upsetting. I thought that I was going to cry and I was about to. So the language you use is amazing.