AaronTheRocker

Humans. The most social organism on the planet and an organism that depends on others.

This is sad. After reading this I thought about the book and movie "A Walk To Remember" and felt the same emotions as this story did for me. 😢
I liked how you presented the idea of a loss happening making it true to it's experience and the reminiscence of it.
Amazing writing.

Astounding. Striking. Stupefying. Breathtaking- just a few words to describe this.

The symbolism of butterfly kisses and it's fragility to the human condition is oh so beautiful in connection. From emotion to events and interactions of peers to the mental state of one's being, it wraps together like a blanket. Also, not to mention, that you took characteristics of red and blue symbolism (tears and blood) to create a hopeful loving color of purple (a kiss).

Personally, I'd recommend for a more noteworthy of a read (not that it isn't) would be to confront a certain passage.

"The thunder of their screams
Humanity is being torn apart
Excruciatingly"

Sort of took a step off the path. Although it followed the theme and idea of the writing, those lines seemed to "veer" a little from the flow, but none the less went back on after. Just my personal take.

Can't wait to see what other material you may put out.

So what you're saying is like the song by the Heavy Metal group Dio with the song, "Stand Up and Shout".
I like it

This may be your first, but is a sure good one.

Life is full of knife twisting. It's our job heal the wounds before it's too late.

This is astonishing!
The deep, thick, heavy imagery is like you are painting a high-detailed moving picture with words to make it mystical and give it the movement that makes it come alive in our brains to create what we see, what we think and feel.
A true work of art.
Just like what Lynnyan said, you are talented and deserve more and the best.

There is beauty in broken and what is great about broken things, they can usually be fixed. May not be in the best of shape, but it sure does help.
Fine writing. Flows like a calm river. Gentle, but filled with great bountiful meaning.