Skylar

This is something I really needed right now. It's amazing! Keep writing!

This is pretty good so far! The main thing about your story that I would fix is that you say her name very often. Personally, I have a problem of saying 'he' or 'she' too often, but you say her name a little too often. It's probably just the one spot at the top of the story ("... Pricking at Aniya's nerves, repeating every few seconds. Aniya's breath...") and it threw me off, making me see her name more prominently, but it bothered me. Sorry for the long criticism. Keep writing!

I love this! It's kind of simple, and kind of stated in a matter of fact way, but I think that helps emotion go through. It's really good!

This is really good. I feel kind of bad for having nothing else to say, but it is really good.

I hate talking to people about my... Problems. Just like you said, I don't understand it myself, so why should they? Why should I trust them with knowledge about my thoughts and feelings when I don't tell even my closest friends?

This is so beautiful. I've always loved repetition of sentences, they just seem to bring out more emotion, more... I dunno. Just more. Keep writing!

Same.