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Aishlynn is from US United States • 21 y/o

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A Student's Worth by TheForgotten

This is exactly how I feel about school.

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Just a Touch by Ghost

This is really, really good, as well as very true.

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The Wind Knew by Thomas Ray

Wow, this is really good! I hope to see more of your work!

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Lu (Part Two) by Thomas Ray

Part of the thing with the name is the style your going for. Lu sounds (to me) like a name of a fantasy type world. Names like the ones melissak suggested fit the world, and the ones I would say most fits your style are Keon or Yusuf, although the others are fine as well. The names sound a bit too rich for a poor boy, especially if he's an orphan. I looked up some names (although I feel like that's never very satisfying), and I found a few that were okay.
Ern
Pepin
William
Liam
Most of the others were kinda weird. Hope this helps!

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Lu (Part Four) by Thomas Ray

Well, Henna is weird, and Sir Ayren seems kinda fishy, but I'm sure there's more on that later.

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The Story of a Boy and Girl by TheForgotten

It's sad and lonely. It bleeds emotion, and is just so perfectly... I don't know how to describe it. Honestly, this is how I feel about all of my friendships. This always happens. This was just written so well, so exactly how it is.

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