alexander

Outside of the fact that you don't have spellcheck on your computer and that your wound up tighter than a virgin at a prison riot, you have the most wonderful imagination.

I keep thinking how wonderful this would be if it were captured in cartoon animation.

I found it refreshing, a trip to OZ or never never land with a slightly dizzy Peter Pan at the helm.

When they release you from the State Home for the Bewildered, I hope you keep writing more in this genre.

I'm giving you five stars because it is true brilliant.

Ciao, JT

A great story. Well done.

hiya!! this is extremely well written, putting aside the minor lack of punctuation. keep it up!

I'm a rather big fan of this piece, I wont lie. I feel for the characters every time I read it. This was amazing~

really good story. good job.

wahh so inspirational!! keep it up

I really liked this. I felt like you pulled words out of how I feel. I can relate to this on an emotional level. Thank you.