United States • 20 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Great job!
this is such a good story love the details and the storyline
I love all of the describing details that you used
Yessssssss make more!!!!!!!!!
Don't listen to Apemann
This is such an inspiring sad story! I love it.
This is such a cute poem. Write more you have a great skill!
Don't listen to Andy. Hes completely and totally wrong,this has a wonderfully beautiful message to tell and I love how you used an egg as an example super creative and brilliant. Keep on writing and don't let mean and untrue comments make you stop writing!(And I get that i'm 11 and someone who most people would call immature and not the best writer but whatever I love your story!) There should be a 6 star because this one deserves 6 not 5 stars!
this is such a cute story I love it!