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this is good. it might be better if you filled it with more emotion. i take very little emotion back with me from reading this. mostly i enjoyed it. keep going!

this is good. it's a good tug on the heart strings and very relatable.

this was good, i feel like people can really connect to it and that's great. i really liked it.

this was a good piece of writing. it expresses a lot of emotion. i liked it quite a lot.

good. the emotion is a little more here this time! like it. keep it up :)

this is really good. i like it and it's relatable. :)