GONE

short and sweet. i like it

this is good. it might be better if you filled it with more emotion. i take very little emotion back with me from reading this. mostly i enjoyed it. keep going!

this is good. it's a good tug on the heart strings and very relatable.

this is really good. i like it and it's relatable. :)

this is good, i find it slightly empty, lacking emotion. there's emotion in there but as a reader i can't connect to it. it's written well and with a bit more work, it will be great.
don't mean to offend you, so please don't think that. this is just my opinion.