The are some grammatical errors but other wise it is really good. Cannot wait to read more of your writing.
I really like this
I really like this. Amazingly written
Haha. That is what he gets
I like this but I wishing for a happy ending.
Keep up the good work. You are a great writer
I like that song.
I love this. It is so brave of you to finally say something, this is not a man's world. It is ours