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Just wow-

my heart- (ik what u mean, by it never happened to you, but wrote it, that's me in a couple of words, anyway moving on to what I'm writing this for-) this was really good, Lyn. All those short sentences really put this all together. The simple sentences really puts an emotional effect on the reader, your word choices were really effective and rhymed in a weird way.
PERFECTTT

Miv, this is a really good short story, you've really put it into one nice masterpiece that really fits in really well. Your brilliant word choices, make this short story, really effective and really put a good effect on the reader. Just brilliant. Keep up the good work, and I'll be here to give you 5 stars!

It's just like...so..good..like...words...cant describe it. I've read Doom Befallen,, since Part 2, and man is it gooooooooooOOoOD. KEEP WRITITNG LYN, CAUSE THIS IS RLLY GOOOOOOOOOOOD

Your best friend, shall be very happy. Keep Writinggg

This is really good. Honestly. Keep writing bro/sis!

Omg, Ya NeED TO kEep WrIiTINGGG i need to know hwat happende dnext

OMG LYN THIS IS THE BEST- i have no words to correct it.