United States • 21 y/o • MaleReviews Given
Nice. It's sad that things like that actually happen.
I need a sequel! You don't have to, of course, but I am interested to see what you can come up with.
I love this! I grew up being alone and my only friends being imaginary, so this struck me in a very personal way.
Stop playing with my emotions Misty! First I thought she was going to be kidnapped(the gray colorless buildings) Then she was going to get married, and then he was going to die. But no! She was about to get married and I was all excited. Then BLAM! He dies, the wedding was a daydream, and my heart was crushed.
This is a good story, it says a lot about life.
Somebody has anger issues. Was she too angry to think he might find a way to do both? One of my theories was that he would take her family to someone who could take care of them. I can definitely relate to Analise; I don't seem like someone who can be angered easily, but I can be. This story is doing great, keep up all the good work.