United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
This is good.
Great poem! There are a couple of incomplete sentences, but this is a poem. So, I guess it doesn't really matter(I don't really know if it matters or not)?
This is so funny! I love it!
Although this story is really good, I think if you just had the first one it would be better. This is just my opinion though.
I agree with oxygen. Keep working on the poetry! ;p
Great job! I hope you write a second part!
nice poem
I remember coming up with these! Lol!