Ace

I used to live in an orphanage, but then I found a really nice family. :)

this was good, maybe in the next part you could add a twist of some sort.

Great job! I hope you write a second part!

I agree with oxygen. Keep working on the poetry! ;p

This is so funny! I love it!

Although this story is really good, I think if you just had the first one it would be better. This is just my opinion though.

Great poem! There are a couple of incomplete sentences, but this is a poem. So, I guess it doesn't really matter(I don't really know if it matters or not)?

nice poem