Reviews Given by Ace on Short Stories 101

Two Brief Flashes by lemonslice

What do the two vignettes have to do with each other? Just a little confused, sorry.

29 Mar, 2019 0 Edit Delete

Coco Pt.2 by LittleDevil

This story needs some work but it's pretty good for the most part.

19 May, 2019 0 Edit Delete

This Is What Happens When I Get Tired... by Bird

I am a little confused. With a little bit more, this story could be amazing!

28 Mar, 2019 0 Edit Delete

Your Voice by scorp

This is so funny! I love it!

1 Apr, 2019 0 Edit Delete

So Close Yet So Far by scorp

This is good.

29 Mar, 2019 0 Edit Delete

Love and Painting by scorp

I go to the same school as Faith and she draws eyes soooo much! She is soooo good at drawing! One question: would it be okay if you made these stories a little longer please?

9 Mar, 2019 0 Edit Delete

Rethink Your Existence by scorp

I remember coming up with these! Lol!

9 Mar, 2019 0 Edit Delete

The Jar by Optimism101

It's pretty good. You just have to continue to work on the poetry, but that can be fixed. Nice work!

27 Mar, 2019 0 Edit Delete

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