United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
I am a little confused. With a little bit more, this story could be amazing!
What do the two vignettes have to do with each other? Just a little confused, sorry.
This story needs some work but it's pretty good for the most part.
It's pretty good. You just have to continue to work on the poetry, but that can be fixed. Nice work!
Nice story!
This is good.
Great poem! There are a couple of incomplete sentences, but this is a poem. So, I guess it doesn't really matter(I don't really know if it matters or not)?
This is so funny! I love it!