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This is really good. I hope you feel better! ;)

I suggest that you add a few line breaks so that the reader can have a collective moment, but otherwise, it is really good! I truly hope you feel much better!

This is such an amazing story!

Doesn't bao bao also mean bun in Chinese? Anyhow, great story. I know this must be hard for you to write about. Just a couple of years ago I lost my Grandpa. Although I did not know him as well as I would have liked, I still feel like a big part of me has disintegrated.

This is really good

This is such an amazing poem! I hope you continue to write more! ;)

Wow, this is so heartfelt. I felt the same way when all of my friends went to Costa Rica. I felt kind of empty. I would spend my time reading and thinking about just random stuff. I hope you feel better! :)

I completely agree with this poem. Although people say "sticks and stones may break your bones but words will never hurt you" this is not completely true. Great job!