Ace

This is an amazing poem. I love how you expressed your feelings in the way of a flower(if that makes any sense).

This describes Catalina perfectly!

This is so funny! I love it!

Although this story is really good, I think if you just had the first one it would be better. This is just my opinion though.

This is so good! Please write more!

I agree with oxygen. Keep working on the poetry! ;p

Great job! I hope you write a second part!