United States • 25 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
I like another part. meeting the mentor. And kicking him in the nuts. That's cool too.
I've never read any of your other poems before this one so I can't comment on the others yet or compare this one to them but I thoroughly enjoyed this and didn't want to stop reading it if I'm honest I didn't want it to end. :)
I LOVE IT. You can tell a very good story. AND I love anime including attack on titans
Oof. Sorry, old habit. ANYWAYS, It's a nice story. It makes a character and a world in which unknown details are filled in by the original song. Also, the OP is kinda a jerk. He was getting married to someone and left her. It seems like an endless cycle, with the fiance being the new Op. Otherwise, it's a nicely written story with much emotions. Keep writing! We will keep reading.
It's some good fluff. The flashback is in amazing detail, and I'm not sure if it was a dream or the past. ()-() It's a nice story. Not sure who lit the fire though. Mom, daughter, or son. Who knows? Keep writing! We will keep reading!
"Never give up, up up. Never let go go go. Never give up. Never let go. You can reach your end goal."
-Pewdiepie, 2016
It's a nice poem that transverses a sad story. Keep writing! We will keep reading!