IanG

This is a simple but effective piece. Well done.

There's no shame in being anxious at a time like this, so are millions all over the world. Even adults feel like that from time to time.

Good jokes and good imagery; keep it up.

'As the would was being nice' should read 'as the world was being nice.'
'I got unconscious' should read 'I fell unconscious.'

Even so, you wrote some good descriptions. I like the line about dancing dolphins. Keep it up and you'll get past mistakes like those above.

This is a good start for a young writer. If you want to improve it, explain why the princess is always so sad. Perhaps her father offended the same witch who turned the prince into a bear and so she's under a curse too. If not, perhaps someone she cared about died young for some reason.

I'm not big on the technical aspects of poetry, but the feelings behind this are plausible and heartfelt. I'm sorry for your loss.

You evoke a sense of place very well. Your protagonist's self-criticism is plausible, as are her hopes for her daughter.

A well written piece with a touch of mystery about the heroine.