Joshua_12

wow. this is like looking at my life story, sort of. good job.

Whoa, that gave me chills. You did really well! :)

whoa. gave me chills!!! sent shivers down my crooked spine!

That was so good! It really sounded like it was coming from a mom, good job!! :)

I actually want to watch the movie you got inspiration from.

that was really good. i liked how you worded it; it really made me cry :(

Wow! That's amazing. Gave me chills and smiles! Great job

That is a really sad story. good job.