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Kaleighishappy is from GB United Kingdom • 27 y/o • Female

"....Inspirational, funny, and overall exciting."
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From_Me
From_Me reviewed Someday or Sometime

great job

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yaminwriter
yaminwriter reviewed FOCUS!

Good description of feelings. Keep it up but improve grammar

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kiraafinifrock
Kiraa reviewed Someday or Sometime

Everything fit well for the topic, good use of structure.

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sorrynotsorry
sorrynotsorry reviewed Tortured

There's a little bit of grammar errors, and a little bit more backstory about the friend would be nice in my opinion, but overall decent story!

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BookishForever23
BookishForever23 reviewed Her First Kiss; His First Love (Chpt. 14)

SOOOO GOOD! WRITE MORE!! I'm loving this!

Wish it was a real episode or movie

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bufordwm
bufordwm reviewed What Is There?

I think you have an interesting concept here, but it seems like you just started drafting and didn't try to create a whole narrative. Don't be afraid to continue building on it. Your instinct to withhold information is good, especially in flash story format. But you've withheld too much. We can only guess what is happening in the second part.

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BookishForever23
BookishForever23 reviewed Her First Kiss; His First Love (Chpt. 13)

SOOO GOOD! I want to know her secret!!! You have to write that in your next book!

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BookishForever23
BookishForever23 reviewed Her First Kiss; His First Love (Chpt. 12)

Great Story! But some grammar mistakes like, you wrote hat instead of that... and some other mistakes. Not major but just wanted to point it out before someone gives a bad review!

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