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no. no no no. you can not just end it there! the ending was so short! maybe write another version of the story that is not just a text but more of a narrative? but dont leave it like this!

this was good, maybe in the next part you could add a twist of some sort.

cant wait for the next part!

I think if I was in her situation, I would be less of the "nobody likes me" and more of "you don't even know me."
But I don't know this character very well yet, and we aren't in her head, so there's some ammount of mystery in regards to what she actually feels.
I'm going to read the next part now.

"Stick it to The Man!"- Dewey Finn (Jack Black); School of Rock
You do you, I'll do me and we'll both be happy individuals.

Okay, first I wanna say, thank you for walking inside my mind for a full 204 words of this writing.
Next, I believe you mean "Figment" of my imagination, not "fragment".
Third, if a bear walks into the woods and eats berries, do the two words "bear" and "berries" become one word called "bearries"?
Lastly, let's keep our unique minds just between us if that's cool with you.