United States • 20 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
this was good, maybe in the next part you could add a twist of some sort.
Okay, first I wanna say, thank you for walking inside my mind for a full 204 words of this writing.
Next, I believe you mean "Figment" of my imagination, not "fragment".
Third, if a bear walks into the woods and eats berries, do the two words "bear" and "berries" become one word called "bearries"?
Lastly, let's keep our unique minds just between us if that's cool with you.
I'M DYING!!! I NEED MORE!!!
its really goodd
Nicely Done!
It is so good. I love it . Please let there be more
a few grammatical errors but overall beautiful.
Okay, my first name is Doctor, and my last name is Love. And you have a case of the fallsies it seems for someone who is different based on your diagnosis. Not uncommon, but for sure not common. Seems that the person for you is Spock. He shows no love, but knows the definition of love. Like how you wrote this poem about love, but not having it be a love poem.