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OMG...this carries so many emotions., At first I'm like "Duu Du Du Du Du Du Du DUUU DU Du DUUU DU DUUUUUU..." Then I'm like "Well...he be dead..." and now I have to go curl up in a ball and cry in a corner if you excuse me.

OMG!!! T^T so sad! (but i tottaly ship Silvia and Tom!)

I think that the wind is God, the dark is sin, the light is salvation and heaven, the fear is satan, and the people are being lead to salvation. I really love the story! I think you did a good job of describing and telling the story of the people.

Wow, this story says so much with so little words! Great job!

"I can't-I can't breathe!" screeched Anna. "OH MY GOD OH MY GOD HELP I DIDN'T CONSENT TO THIS-" Katya yelled. I giggled like a total psychopath as the wind rushed back to me, lifting my hair. I swung my legs as we arrived at the bottom and shot up again.

Up, down, up, down. I laughed some more as Katya and Anna held on to their seats for dear life.

The ride slowed down, slowly resting near the ground. With a loud clunk, the seats slowly touched the ground.

"I...I hate-ha...hate you," Katya panted. I cringed as her voice cracked. "Guess who doesn't have any vocal cords anymore." I laughed despite my friend’s disheveled composure.


Me, forcing my friends to do things they don't want to do!

This is so good, sad but good. I can relate to the character who died, sometimes I have to cover my sadness with smiles.

I love it (I ship Matt and Maya so damn hard.)!!! ;)