United States • 19 y/oReviews Received
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH you made me cry.
I love it. I love it so much
Great addition, although there were many minor spelling errors that you may want to check but other than that, it was amazing, sad to see that there might only be one part left unless taylor cheats death, keep up the good work my friend
It's amazing this story rise your spirit and make you to set a goal and work on it till the end... amazing
This sounds like a beautiful song, even if that’s not its intended purpose. Would you mind if I sang this and give you credits?
"I can't-I can't breathe!" screeched Anna. "OH MY GOD OH MY GOD HELP I DIDN'T CONSENT TO THIS-" Katya yelled. I giggled like a total psychopath as the wind rushed back to me, lifting my hair. I swung my legs as we arrived at the bottom and shot up again.
Up, down, up, down. I laughed some more as Katya and Anna held on to their seats for dear life.
The ride slowed down, slowly resting near the ground. With a loud clunk, the seats slowly touched the ground.
"I...I hate-ha...hate you," Katya panted. I cringed as her voice cracked. "Guess who doesn't have any vocal cords anymore." I laughed despite my friend’s disheveled composure.
Me, forcing my friends to do things they don't want to do!
You know, I was curious why you weren't active
Then I thought you were working on something
I was right
This is beautiful
Very energetic, and sweet
You did a good job
and yes loveling11 is a spammer, i got like 5 separate messages from them and finally blocked them
So much... pain. Suffering, and emotion. I know whoever did this to you would be sorry after reading this. And... I'm sorry you had to go through this. This sounds like hell with no return.
I thought it was great in definition. I believe the mind reading is a gift it's not like they didn't want it happening... I'd like to read part two...