United States • 17 y/oReviews Given
short and beautiful. wonderfully inspiring!
the description was so good and now i'm jelly :P
oh my god i absolutely loved this imagery(and your username)! it's very dark with a great twist, breaking all formatting rules.
a-ma-zing.
I absolutely loved this! This needs more ratings :P
hey! i loved this little poem!
if you would like some constructive criticism i've got some:
it seems like you're trying a bit too hard to make things rhyme. not that there's anything wrong with that, but it seems a little awkward. not all poems need to rhyme at the end.
besides that, i think its amazing! great job!
oh my god, this was heart-wrenching. love the dramatics. beautiful <3<3<3
ommmmg i loved this!
pretty short, but hits the same.