United States • 18 y/oReviews Given
Write more please! What happens next? The child needs some happiness in his life. Nice work!
I can relate to this. Beautifully written!
It's so beautifully written! I can really picture and I can feel what you feel about this person. Awesome job and keep it up!
I would be scared out of my mind. When I was in 1st grade, we heard a gun sound by the school and I was terrified. Beautifully written and keep it up!
I need to say this to every new person I meet... Keep up the great work!
This poem makes you question everything. Very few words, yet beautifully written. Keep up the great work!
continue this please! Cliffhangers drive me crazy.
Really deep. I love this story! Not many words, but beautifully written.