United States • 19 y/oReviews Given
Write more please! What happens next? The child needs some happiness in his life. Nice work!
I can relate to this. Beautifully written!
It's so beautifully written! I can really picture and I can feel what you feel about this person. Awesome job and keep it up!
I would be scared out of my mind. When I was in 1st grade, we heard a gun sound by the school and I was terrified. Beautifully written and keep it up!
I need to say this to every new person I meet... Keep up the great work!
This poem makes you question everything. Very few words, yet beautifully written. Keep up the great work!