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What do you mean this is bad? It's very good! I love it!

Just the beginning is awesome. I can't even imagine the next part. I CAN'T WAIT! What happens next?

This story is lovely! True friendship.

This is so good! I know this was written a long time ago and the author probably won't even see this, but it is AWESOME. Believe me, I've tried writing poems that rhymed, and it's hard.
But this person made it look easy!
Anyways, one of the best poems I've read so far.

Very good and I love it! Great start. But I hope in the next chapter we know the name of the main character and like Thomas Ray said, this person needs some joy.