United States • 17 y/oReviews Given
Very good and I love it! Great start. But I hope in the next chapter we know the name of the main character and like Thomas Ray said, this person needs some joy.
This is so good! I know this was written a long time ago and the author probably won't even see this, but it is AWESOME. Believe me, I've tried writing poems that rhymed, and it's hard.
But this person made it look easy!
Anyways, one of the best poems I've read so far.
This story is lovely! True friendship.
Just the beginning is awesome. I can't even imagine the next part. I CAN'T WAIT! What happens next?
What do you mean this is bad? It's very good! I love it!
Everyday of my life sucked until I read this.
I kind of really feel bad for them though...
Random. But good.
Very good!! But I think if you add a bit more detail, it would be better...