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very scary situation! Thank you for sharing

how tragic !
Very well done
A few grammatical errors, but the idea is brilliant

Very well written.
Are you going to go further with the story?

So very sad!
You really drew me into your 'hurt'
I wish you all the best for the future...

Please do continue writing.... It can be very therapeutic

So simple and so sweet! Write more...

Looking forward to reading more.....

Really enjoyed it..... Let's just watch this space hey?