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Lussac

Lussac is from FR France • 62 y/o

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Bumpy Writings by coffeesoakedshoes

I liked this. Very brave of you to continue actually writing whilst experiencing rough turbulence... although I imagine it must have been quite therapeutic.
I just noticed one tiny detail.... did you really have a 'handle' on your mug of tea???

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Who Are You by HazbinAllover

I like your message. Carry on being strong!

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Fake Smiles by SoulsToWrite

I like the 'honesty' of your style.
If this is autobiographical, I feel for you. Have courage, you'll find other like-minded souls along the way....
And carry on writing!

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The Huffy and the Whatchamacallit by Ricky Taylor

I enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing your memory with us all.

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The Herd by SianD

I liked this story.

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Under the Street Light by Kimberly Owen

Great short story. I liked much of the description throughout and also the hopeful ending

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My Brain, The Dictator by aquietvoice

Not normally a great lover of poetry, but I thought this was great. Well done!

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The Girl in the Sea by Neil K Spencer

I enjoyed it.
One thing I noticed though was maybe a little too much description at the intense moments e.g. "...entering the water, if only up to the laces of her hazel brown walking boots". In my opinion, it detracted from the tension. In other parts though your descriptions worked well.

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