Lussac

Well done Paul, I like the way you built up your characters

This is so sad, so heart-felt.....
Well done!

I really liked the interesting twist of the ending....

Hilarious

Had me engrossed - until the very last sentence.... Not sure about the "dream-end" though I must admit..... made me swap from a 5 star to 4 star

I like your message. Carry on being strong!

Please do continue writing.... It can be very therapeutic

So very sad!
You really drew me into your 'hurt'
I wish you all the best for the future...