𝕝𝕪𝕟𝕘𝕓𝕒𝕜𝕣𝟠𝟚

“trapped in a fragile hour glass
pelted by the slowly falling sand
waiting for someone to notice me
but for now
I'm lonely”

Wow. Just wow. I really like this one. Nicely done.

Yay! First of all, I love the song you’re referencing in the first couple lines. Second of all, this poem is lovely. You did good :)

This is beautifully written. The emotions are really raw, and I love how you expressed them. I want you to know that you are not alone. There are people who are going through this same feeling, and also people who care about you and want to help you. Keep your chin up <3

such a sad yet beautiful piece. i love the way you scattered the prose throughout to help illustrate how the characters are feeling. great job!

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the dynamic between Fia and Callum is wonderful. keep it up :)

oh my worddd. this was beautiful. i love how the words flow and carry the reader along with them. great job with this one :)

yayayayay :D
this one has such good vibes. it made me smile reading it. great job!

great work with this one! the descriptions are really nice. they make it feel like the reader has been dropped into the forest you're writing about. keep writing :)