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So relatable! :)
Trying to find the balance between day-to-day responsibilities and your own well-being is a challenge, and it doesnβt help when you start to lose interest in the things you enjoy and your brain is being unkind. I hope you find the motivation to push through it and find joy in the little things, even if your life isnβt how you imagined. Proud of you for making it this far
βtrapped in a fragile hour glass
pelted by the slowly falling sand
waiting for someone to notice me
but for now
I'm lonelyβ
Wow. Just wow. I really like this one. Nicely done.
Yay! First of all, I love the song youβre referencing in the first couple lines. Second of all, this poem is lovely. You did good :)
This is beautifully written. The emotions are really raw, and I love how you expressed them. I want you to know that you are not alone. There are people who are going through this same feeling, and also people who care about you and want to help you. Keep your chin up <3
such a sad yet beautiful piece. i love the way you scattered the prose throughout to help illustrate how the characters are feeling. great job!
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the dynamic between Fia and Callum is wonderful. keep it up :)
oh my worddd. this was beautiful. i love how the words flow and carry the reader along with them. great job with this one :)
yayayayay :D
this one has such good vibes. it made me smile reading it. great job!