𝕝𝕪𝕟𝕘𝕓𝕒𝕜𝕣𝟠𝟚

You did a really good job of keeping the action going the entire time. It was interesting to get inside the thief's mind. The cliffhanger at the end left me wanting to read more. Great job :)

please write more! your writing style is beautiful

Whoa! Love this! The world needs a hope-filled message like this, especially during this year

I love this! Your writing style is beautiful, and the twist at the end is so sad but it brings the whole story together. Great job :)

This is a beautiful heartfelt poem. Your words do a great job of conveying these complex emotions. If you need someone to talk out your emotions with, reach out any time. :)

ahhh! i love it so far! can't wait to read more :D

i respectfully disagree with the author's note. this is good, it just feels unfinished, but since it's part 2, that's okay. i love how you depicted the change in everli. can't wait to read more :D

oh my word. this story took my breath away. the sadness and eloquence of the words is just beautiful. keep writing! :D