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This is another amazing way to look at life, we all have trials and this poem illustrates that fact in a way all of us can appreciate.
As far as the story goes, the grammar and English side of things could be improved. But once again you wrote a story that is great.
This so touching, heart wrenching in a way. But it shows how it is in a way that can be understood. Fantastic job!
Very interesting...
I think this is a beautiful outlook on life, and I love it.
I suppose in way this story paints a picture of what it's really like to move. We often get settled and attached to those around us, so when change threatens to rip us from that comfort we have a hard time letting it all go. So, good job! This is amazing.
That was a very clever way to convey a story. It was very inspiring. Good job!
I think the structure of the story is fantastic! It's definitely sad, but in a touching way. I think the way it was all written out was interesting, so keep writing!