Amber Jones

I think this is a beautiful outlook on life, and I love it.

Very interesting...

This so touching, heart wrenching in a way. But it shows how it is in a way that can be understood. Fantastic job!

As far as the story goes, the grammar and English side of things could be improved. But once again you wrote a story that is great.

This is another amazing way to look at life, we all have trials and this poem illustrates that fact in a way all of us can appreciate.

Could be edited, but still. Wow. That was good.

Pretty good...

There are so many different voices in our lives, constantly telling us to do something, pushing our decision in a certain direction. So there is a lot of pressure behind making a choice...Good job.