Oxygen

*sniffle*sniffle*. This is so sad but so good. Keep on writing more poems. Keep up the great work.

I really liked this. It is inspirational. Good job.

wow. This poem was fun and well written. Keep on writing!

Is this a true? If it is this is such a touching story and nobody should have to got through this. This poem almost made me cry. Feel better.

HOLY COW! That cliff hanger tho. Good job. You made me want to hide under my bed. Keep on writing

Wow. Such a good story. Is there going to be a second one?

This story touched my heart because I also lost my grandmother. It happened several years ago but it feels as if it has only been two day. Keep on writing

This is so sad, but inspiring. I too have gone through tough times with my mom, but this story has inspired me to be grateful for her life. Keep on writing