Oxygen

Great story. This inspired me and I can't wait to read the other parts. Keep on writing.

AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! So good. I love the part where Mark sings the songs to his dad. Can't wait for you to write more!!!! Keep up the great work!

I really liked this story despite all the gore and horror stuff. Keep on writing.
P.S. maybe add more of a background for the characters.
Good job!
:D

I love this. It is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read.

I found this story funny and it made me laugh so hard. I really liked it. Keep on writing.

HOLY COW! That cliff hanger tho. Good job. You made me want to hide under my bed. Keep on writing

This is really what happens in your home. Yes. Well I'm moving in! I need this kind of excitement in my life. Being an only child means you never get to insult anybody on a daily basis. I wish I had someone to fight with( in my family, not friends. Don't need anymore of that). This review sounds stupid. Anyways it was a good story defiantly gonna recommend it to anyone who is bored.

yeesh! ScArY! Was this the one that was gonna be called Midwest, USA?