Oxygen

Great story. This inspired me and I can't wait to read the other parts. Keep on writing.

simple, amazing, inspiring & a great poem!

I really like it. Good job!

yeesh! ScArY! Was this the one that was gonna be called Midwest, USA?

It's a good story. You may want to edit the "dooes" to make it seem less weird. Also are all the people in the story the same in real life, like at our school?

This is really what happens in your home. Yes. Well I'm moving in! I need this kind of excitement in my life. Being an only child means you never get to insult anybody on a daily basis. I wish I had someone to fight with( in my family, not friends. Don't need anymore of that). This review sounds stupid. Anyways it was a good story defiantly gonna recommend it to anyone who is bored.

HILARIOUS! Remember the story I told you about the two sides of my head fighting? This story reminded me of it. Keep on writing!

Remember, don't feel bad about yourself. You are not useless! Keep on writing!
P.S.: isn't' it a needle in a haystack?