United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Niceeee!!! I love the creativity in this sooo much. The last two lines really felt like a punchline for a good joke.
This was really well written, and I feel like you’ve expressed the idea of the person’s memory and legacy living on with others in a very different way. The second person aspect was also really cool. I don’t think I’ve seen any other second person stories on here before, but it was really neat and creative of you to have made it that way. Beautiful job! :)
Chills... I'm gonna have a hard time sleeping tonight. Nice job! :)
I like thisss. I'm not sure if this is the intended story you had, but I got Hunger Games vibes from it; like the speaker and "The One" are the last ones in the ring or something. I love the way you phrased the poem!
oh no... THE ALARM!!! XD
whoaaaaa... Elijah did not--
ooooooo. Well, that happened.... The Codista ship has set sail!
Cuteee! Ina sounds adorable! <3