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Poor Zekey... also, random thought, but I thought it was weird that the teacher's name is so close to TruMoo... maybe I just want choco milk. :P
oh. my. gawd. THE GIANT HEDGEHOG!!! XD
I definitely regret what I said earlier now....
ooooo. I love it! I think the words/lyrics would be a great song. :D
I did have to pull out the Google Spanish translator.... But I think it's awesome that you incorporated another language in your story -- it really added to the effect. The translations made me laugh a little at how spiteful some of the words were (especially the mom's... I was like "Omg she did not just go there..."). I really like the story so far!!!! :D
Once again... AWESOME! The start off line with the "hunk of stuff" was fireeee!!!🔥🔥🔥 I am sooooo looking forward to the next part!
Oh geez... you realize that this is basically where I left off yesterday, right?!?! WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO MEH?!?!?!?!?!
This is sooo relatable. I like the deep meaning behind it, and I feel like that's what really connected to me. Nice job!!! And I dunno what the "everyone else sees" in your poem, but I see a really talented writer and interesting person. I look forward to reading more from you! :D
Interestinggg... it may be too soon, but shiiiiiiiiiiip!?!?!