France • 18 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Beautifully written! Could feel the emotions while reading...
Amazing!
In the end, I have a wide smile on my face!
Loved it!
XOXO
Sansid!
It was good... though I didn't enjoy that much and you could hv used more of pronouns than Steven!
WOW!!!
This is very sweet! While reading this, I remembered my fights with my parents!
This makes me cry! Dude!
Amazingly written
Very short but it touched my heart, dude! Loved it! XOXO, Sansid
The amazing and mysterious ending!!!
I love reading this one!
Really enjoyed... Please write more of this. I would love to read more!
I completely agree with @Rosemary99
Brilliant Job!!!
Great usage of words @VIDHI. I love the concept and idea. Short but very strong. You represent all the girls in the world. Love it! :)
PSsst A suggestion- You could have written more... That would have made it more understanding and interesting!
Great job!
You made this one of my favourites! :)
I guess you should write a bit more, I mean like I started reading a part and then, in a few seconds it's over... I mean the story is gr8 but it is really slow!
I hope u get it what I am trying to say... :)
Um... you have made a few mistakes. Like spelling mistakes, that's all and otherwise... it's gr8!