SilverOaks

You did good! The ending felt a little rushed, but it was still a good story.

Wow! That was a great story. I hope you're writing a sequel. If so, I can't wait!

This me all of it

I love it and so do a second part of Hes Gone.

This story is very good! Keep up the work! Have a nice day.

Whoa...did anyone who read this get reminded of the movie, "The Labyrinth" with David Bowie? I can't be the only one who did.
I like where this is going.

that was great