Striker

Yes, I believe you should. It has a good feel to it. I like the characters especially for some reason I relate to everyone as of right now, but yeah keep it up can't wait to see what comes next!

You know that I'd love an epilogue of everyone else's POV. Keep up the great work love.

It's a beautiful poem, nicely written and well, has a great structure and a wonderful meaning of which I can relate to.

I love it, and I can relate on a personal level as well as having a sort of first hand account, if you know who I am of course. Keep up the great work.

Plez givz meh hugs. I is lonely...

Jesus, I swear you know how to write a good no a fantastic read, I love it and I hope you plan to make more parts and not just leave it at that cliffhanger, because I want to know what their reactions will be and what happens in those 8 days and 56 minutes, how will he decide to spend them... or..... finds a way to cheat the system! But as always props to you mate.

Great addition, although there were many minor spelling errors that you may want to check but other than that, it was amazing, sad to see that there might only be one part left unless taylor cheats death, keep up the good work my friend

Ahhhh yes, I do hope you finish this story for it is one of greatness and has lots of potential, now if and when you finish it, I shall find a bard to write a song about it because I feel as if that is only fair for a warrior such as this one.
Great story overall, really love it and can't wait for the next part.