Reviews Given
this is a really cute story :) i like it a lot, do u have any editors? is you don't mind, when you write your next story, i could help you edit it? ether way the story was cute
this is a beautiful story with a even more beautiful meaning and hope. amazing as always
omg i love this! it is short but so powerful and the rhymes are amazing! good job!
i love this and i loved how it rhymed at the beginning! nice work!
omg i love this can't wait for the next part!
nooooooooo she cant goooooo! she didn't even get to see his reaction or slap him in the face of anything! omg immuna cryyyy! still, amazing story!
wait i want his reaction! do a epilouge part 2! pleeeeease! i cant stand not knowing!
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