United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
i like that you shared what is going on in your life and i guess it think that it is one of those situations that you have to be really patient and just be there for her as much as you can to prove that you aren't going anywhere and that she can trust you. as far as text, you have a lot of grammatical errors and it was kind of hard to understand but i hope everything turns out fine for you
this is a really cute story :) i like it a lot, do u have any editors? is you don't mind, when you write your next story, i could help you edit it? ether way the story was cute
this is a beautiful story with a even more beautiful meaning and hope. amazing as always
omg i love this! it is short but so powerful and the rhymes are amazing! good job!
oh i was waiting for it to continue! don't stop in the middle!
i love this and i loved how it rhymed at the beginning! nice work!
omg i love this can't wait for the next part!
nooooooooo she cant goooooo! she didn't even get to see his reaction or slap him in the face of anything! omg immuna cryyyy! still, amazing story!