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amazing *clapping and crying and screaming all at one*

love it its cute, tbh you came on a little strong on the first few texts, next time just ease into it, but other than that i love it!

dont stop now! and add some sort of twist or like other characters or something, but it was good!

no. no no no. you can not just end it there! the ending was so short! maybe write another version of the story that is not just a text but more of a narrative? but dont leave it like this!

a few grammatical errors but overall beautiful.

wow. i literally dont know what to say. this is amazing, i love h the way you manipulated your word to make them sound and flow so beautifully. amazing.

om i love this it is amazing, it has such a beautiful enigma to it. amazing!

wow. i like have no words this is sooooo good!